From a0ba873db1e95452a0a3be611c97063f248aed14 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: gitwuethrich <32637467+gitwuethrich@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 10 Oct 2017 12:18:21 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Update Callback-Stats-and-Privacy.md (#7460)

Hi again
1. deleted 1 "total" before BGP (i hope this is what was meant) and switched to "total devices" accordingly, so it isn't once "... total" and then "total ..."
2. bgp -> BGP (doesn't really matter, but abbreviations are usually uppercase)
3. added a "we"... at first it sounded like "you shouldn't ask us" or something like that, with the "we" it's clearer in my opinion
---
 doc/General/Callback-Stats-and-Privacy.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/General/Callback-Stats-and-Privacy.md b/doc/General/Callback-Stats-and-Privacy.md
index 3dddf4d867..7773a56333 100644
--- a/doc/General/Callback-Stats-and-Privacy.md
+++ b/doc/General/Callback-Stats-and-Privacy.md
@@ -11,12 +11,12 @@ Now onto the bit you're interested in, what is submitted and what we do with tha
 
 #### What is submitted ####
 - All data is anonymous.
-- Generic statistics are taken from the database, these include things like device total, type and os, port types, speeds and total, total bgp peers. Take a look at the code for full details.
+- Generic statistics are taken from the database, these include things like total devices, type and os, port types, speeds and total BGP peers. Take a look at the code for full details.
 - Pairs of sysDescr and sysObjectID from devices with a small amount of sanitation to prevent things like hostnames from being submitted.
 - We record version numbers of php, mysql, net-snmp and rrdtool
 - A random UUID is generated on your own install.
 - That's it!
-- Your IP isn't logged, even via our web service accepting the data. We don't need to know who you are so don't ask.
+- Your IP isn't logged, even via our web service accepting the data. We don't need to know who you are so we don't ask.
 
 #### What we do with the data ####
 - We store it, not for long - 3 months at the moment although this could change.